End of Love

End of love is like any other season.
Suddenly overnight, with a hint of treason.

There was no fight, or fanfare.
Only an acrid smell of burnt hair.

A solitary heart raged louder than a storm.
What was begotten got buried in earth like a worm.

Sooner or later this feeling too will end,
Like all things that eventually transcend.

*The Thursday Poets Rally*

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11 Responses to End of Love

  1. teardropheart says:

    Hey – I love your poem and I thought that love was like you describe it…unfortunately that hasn’t been the reality for me. In fact, it’s been 1.2 years since the break up and I am still madly in love..crazy? Yes..

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  2. Amrita Ghosh says:

    yeah, love can be crazy and it takes time to heal and move on. thanks for stopping by!

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  3. TK says:

    a gem ..will treasure..

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  4. Rimjhim says:

    enjoyed reading…..soon u will b in love again πŸ˜‰

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  5. Amrita Ghosh says:

    thank you πŸ™‚

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  6. tigerbrite says:

    Nicely done. Like the last line.

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  7. ashbeezone says:

    Very Nice Poetry with an amazing Imagination
    Great Work of Creativity !! Highly Expressive !!

    It was indeed enjoyable after reading this one !!

    Anyways, Take a look some of my Poetry Collections …
    http://ashbeezone.wordpress.com/category/talent-underground/poetry-zone/

    some of my Haiku Collections
    http://ashbeezone.wordpress.com/category/creative-challenges/the-haiku-challenge/

    and also, on my very recent Work as well
    http://ashbeezone.wordpress.com/2011/08/15/india-of-my-dream/

    !!! Happy Rally !!!
    Cheers !!

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  8. awesome job.

    have fun in the rally.

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  9. zongrik says:

    Sometimes the feeling never ends. You are changed for life.

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  10. Life says:

    love is like an noxious thing. either it mesmerizes you with happiness or fills your heart with bitterness. i loved your poem a lot. πŸ™‚

    from,
    life

    my try at poet’s rally
    http://blindfold-princess.blogspot.com/2011/08/sorrows-i-could-name-it.html?spref=bl

    and my recent work
    http://blindfold-princess.blogspot.com/2011/08/awaiting.html?spref=bl

    something i guess you will be able to connect with. πŸ™‚

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