The 3 of Us

And, then, there was you and me,
And, your forgetfulness,
And, my being able to hear what you never said.

*note: this is a variant of a haiku, but sounds like one nonetheless!

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12 Responses to The 3 of Us

  1. Kavita says:

    An awesome variation!
    Unspoken words, many a time, say a lot more!!!
    Beautifully put!

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  2. Amrita Ghosh says:

    thanks Kavi! just a random passing thought, glad you liked it 🙂

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  3. Jingle says:

    magical,
    you leave readers to think and want for more…
    😉

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  4. Amrita Ghosh says:

    😀 thank you for the kind words Ji…and, for the continued inspiration!

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  5. oinky says:

    Oh i absolutely love this one! such simple words creates vivid emotions and sceneries of never ending stories! 😀

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  6. Ilakya Spandhanaa says:

    ah.. lovely..!! love the last line specially..!! 🙂

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  7. Amrita Ghosh says:

    Thanks Ilakya! 🙂

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  8. Jingle says:

    http://thursdaypoetsrallypoetry.wordpress.com/2010/08/04/the-celebrate-poet-of-july-award-nominations-announcement/

    u r nominated,
    please read other poets and vote for 1 to 30 or 1-? poets from the list.
    thank you in advance!
    🙂

    you win one vote for yourself when you vote.

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  9. Amrita Ghosh says:

    hey Ji…thanks for the consideration!

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  10. brian says:

    i think it is the things left unsaid that scare me the most…

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